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Post by Maeglin on Nov 27, 2005 14:26:59 GMT -5
hS, well done! That's fine. I must add a final tweak though-keep the first Eru line as it is. It doesn't sound quite right trimmed down.
Good! I think I'm ready to have a go at the first few scenes. I suggest we put the edited scenes on a new Fall of the Noldor neat script thread. Perhaps we could have another thread for suggested editions, as it's all getting a bit cumbersome here.
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Post by Huinesoron on Nov 28, 2005 6:50:52 GMT -5
Will do. But I'll also then trim down one later line, so we don't have Melkor being pegged as 'mightiest among the Ainur' twice. I'll make that final edit and stick it up on a new thread. /And/ open up a thread to play editing havoc with. I'll even stick the current version of Scene 1 up there...
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